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Rated-R-PonyStar
Matthew Nunez
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I am a writer who also happens to be a game designer.

I also like writing scripts for comics, mostly MLP related ones.

Check out my fanfiction at www.fimfiction.net/user/Rated%…

Please also support my patreon for non-Adapting To Night comics: www.patreon.com/ratedponystar?…
Time Fades - Fluttershy - page 1 by Wadusher0

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To help either of us out with this project either donate to my patreon at www.patreon.com/ratedponystar?…

Or Wadusher0's at www.patreon.com/Wadusher0?ty=h

Are we living in a better world? 

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125 deviants said While some things are great, a lot could be better
29%
64 deviants said It's fine, but it could be better
9%
20 deviants said No, these are the worst times
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15 deviants said Yes, we are living in the best time of our lives

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briar-spark Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi, Rated-R-PonyStar! Thank you very much for the watch and the favs!
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Rated-R-PonyStar Featured By Owner 2 days ago
You are welcome. If you would like to do a comic like I do with other artists, please feel free to let me know. I would be happy to do so.
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briar-spark Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! I'll keep that in mind! Thank you, Rated-R-PonyStar!
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Thorondraco Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
I find myself strongly confused by most of your stories. Athermath of a fallen star has taken a turn for the illogical. An impossible xanatos gambit and character not making the most likely decisions for their characters to make. And the villain is not believable as a threat.

You 'negotiations' stories, if only two, are in all honestly just built for emotional manipulation. You killed off multiple characters to create a reaction, rather than have it be character driven. In addition, you use very blatant deus ex machina tactics, especially that ridiculous anti magic field. It makes no sense, especially since no magic seems involved. And devices that just negate powers is an all too common contrivance in many stories, both in fanfiction and in comic books. Even the halved powers is yet another deus ex amchina. Instead of making a world, you created explanation, or even excuses, for why the ponies lost, and that is simply not world building.

And even the story here has issues. How can vampires even be an issue when they can create weapons that allow even a pony like derpy to easily dispatch them? Vampires just do not fit into the world here, and it feels like you have to ignore a lot of elements just to make it work.

Overall your works feel manipulative. I can say that from experience. All three of these stories drew me in at first. All three greatly disappointed me. Yet all three aer popular.
Intentionally or not, you have taken advantage of your fans. They have created an echo chamber of praise, and thus you do not try to improve your craft. And thus all three stories suffer for it greatly. Because they think any criticism will be in some way an attack or will hurt the story. So they overlook the flaws, no matter how glaring.

And there is criticism for your stories, especially in Aftermath. Yet you ignore them. Because the praise is more pleasant. And thus the echo chamber continues.
Thus, i am not going to bother reading your stories anymore. Not aftermath, not the vampires, and not the unnecessary four sequels you are going to create for negotiations in the hopes of garnering more views. They will continue to not improve, so there is no point.

I wish you luck in your exploits, even if they remain the same.
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Rated-R-PonyStar Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
Sorry you feel that way thanks for reading them
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Thorondraco Featured By Owner Edited Jan 5, 2016
Sighs. nevermind
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filip2000ko Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016
What's his problem?! Great stories, Rated-R-PonyStar!!! I can't wait for your continuation of ''Reunited''. And as for you, Thorondraco...
1) A reaction to somone dying is normal (unless you're a robot), it's not manipulation.
2) Not ''field', but Thelman generator. And it's not that stupid. Magic is basicly energy, so in theory it is possible to create a disruptor for it. 
3) The story of both of these fanfics is set AFTER the war, so explanation is the best option. Whenever he'll write a fanfic about what's happening DURING the war, you can talk then.
4) People make mistakes 'kay? And that last paragraph was a bit too harsh, don't you think? I think he can correct his errors, even though I noticed none.
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Dark-seid Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
Hey, i have read Harvester of Eyes and is amazing.  Scary and dark. Congratulations for splendid comic. Congratulations.
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Rated-R-PonyStar Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
Thank you
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TheFerbguy Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch.
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